The children in the Lions class have been really bust creating stories for the Radio 2 500 word competition. They all worked extremely hard, planning and improving their stories. The finished work is amazing. Take a look below:
Animals and friends.
One happy morning everything was dark in my house. My garden
was a secret garden. It had a flower bed inside. Everything looked beautiful.
Me and Frankie went to the secret garden. Then I said to Frankie “Do you want
to play?” He came alive and turned evil. He punched me in the face and gave me
a nose bleed, I wanted to do it back but I didn’t as I taught him to be kind
again. He said sorry and he gave me a hug.
By Princess.
My Dolly came alive.
Yesterday Barbie, Neo and me went to the beach. Barbie
fluttered around, Barbie broke her wings. She broke my mums ornament and she
went up into the bedroom. Then, she messed up my bedroom and Neo said to get
out of my bedroom. She did and they all lived happily ever after.
By Liberty.
The dinosaur story.
One sunny day two dinosaurs called Sophie and James were
best friends. They went to the beach and they went swimming. They got dry and
they watched the sun set. After that it was their tea time. “Goodbye James”
said Sophie and “goodbye” said James. They all lived happily ever after.
By Lucas.
Chloe goes crazy!
It was 1:00pm one summer afternoon. I was playing with my
Designer Friend called Chloe. I put her carefully down. Meanwhile I heard a
little voice and I saw Chloe move. I said “Are you alive?” “Is this a dream?”
“No” she replied. I went for a walk and she followed me. When I turned around I
saw a squirrel in front of Chloe and she went crazy. She copied the squirrel
who was running around in circles. I had to chase her and I chased her back
home. I went to the cosy, living room and looked for a sleepy story. After a
while Chloe fell asleep and I said “phewee!” I watched a film and fell asleep because
I was so exhausted. I hope I never have any trouble like that again.
By Ebony.
Jasmin messed up my bedroom.
Once up on a time, on Friday in my bedroom were me and
Jasmin the unicorn. She was bad and messed up my bedroom. I got the camera and
videoed her to catch her out! I showed her the video so she could see what she
had done. Then, we made up and shared a bath together.
By Jess.
Robin’s boy.
100 days ago in the house were Robin and Robin junior. They
went to a beach. At the beach they saw a water tornado. Robin climbed out of
the tornado and then they walked home.
By Callum.
My Spider.
One day at my home there were two spiders called Webb’s and
Poisoned. They came to life and they had a fight. Poisoned screamed and stopped
them fighting. They then made up and kissed each other.
By Sam.
Lilly and Me.
Once upon a time in the sun it was a beautiful day. Lilly
and Rosie were in Rosie’s bedroom. Lilly made a mess in the kitchen, mum was
cross. Rosie was sad and she told mum what happened. “It was my toy.” said
Rosie, but mum blamed Rosie. She gave Rosie a big cuddle. Rosie told Lilly “You
don’t make a mess in the kitchen.” Lilly said “I’m sorry.”
By Rosie.
The Spider saved the day.
One day at the dinosaur park the spider and dinosaur were
having lunch. The dinosaur was naughty, he hurt the spider. He went to jail.
By Marcus.
Batman’s saving mission.
Once upon a time, under the cushion was Batman. Batman came
to life! The robber then smashed the window in the house. Batman caught the bad
guy and arrested him. Later on, me and Batman snuggled up in bed.
By Louie.
The Alive Shopkin.
One fine morning in my warm bedroom my pillow came alive.
“Who are you?” “I’m Cookie Cookie your pillow!” “You came alive?” “Yes I did!”
said Cookie Cookie. Then she vanished. “OH NO!” said Gracie. The next morning
Cookie Cookie got eaten “Yum!” I said. Then, I cried “Cookie Cookie. I’m upset,
I will miss you!” Next, Cookie Cookie knocked over seven jugs. “Oh no” I
screamed. Then, when I got home there was no cake left. “COOKIE COOKIE!” I
screamed. “Sorry.” she said. Cookie Cookie was really causing mischief. I
decided something had to be done. I would buy new sparkly jugs but Cookie
Cookie needed to go on the naughty step. She sat there for 10 minutes. I said “If
you are good I will get you a pet.” She was so good that I got her a brown
fluffy puppy. She was never naughty again.
By Gracie.
The ugly story.
One day I was playing in my garden with my toys and they
came alive! I was scared. The next night they pulled my hair and in the morning
I was bald. It was nearly lunchtime and my mum was freaked out. So I said “It
was my toys.” She didn’t believe me. “Go to bed now!” said mum. I had no
supper. I was starving. The next morning I had a wig, it was weird! Mum still
didn’t believe me. I had a plan, a very good plan. The plan was to buy them a
pet called Pat and it was a kitten. I said “I will only give you the kitten if
you are good!” They helped with the washing every day. I said “Let’s get the
kitten.” and everybody was happy.
By Oliver.
Bay Max.
On Monday in my bed my toy came alive. It was a toy Hero and
Bay Max. Bay Max got stuck in a purple tornado. He swam out the purple tornado.
The bad guy got arrested.
By Jake.
Bob and the Sweets
One Summer my Minion came to life and my sweets were all
gone. I didn’t know if it was my Minion. I said “Bob have you eaten my sweets?”
Then he said “Yes it was me”. I told him “I’m putting cameras up”.
The next day I looked on the camera and saw Bob take more
sweets. Bob said “I didn’t take the sweets.” I said “Yes you did”. Bob said “No
I didn’t.” I said “I saw you on the CCTV cameras. I hope you do not do it
again.”
The next day I looked on the CCTV cameras and he didn’t do
it again.
By Robert.
The Adventure
It was my birthday January 17th. I was on the
beach. I was sun bathing with my friend and a toy came alive and a vehicle came
with it. I took it home and the next morning the treats from home were gone!
Mum said “Where are the treats?” “I do not know” I replied. “You and your
friend are grounded” said Mum. “For how many days?” I asked. “Until I know who
did this.” “We did not do this” we said. “You did! Go to bed girls!” shouted
Mum.
I asked Cheeky “Have you got something to say?” “No” replied
Cheeky “Why are the treats gone?” I asked. “I do not know.” she said. I
searched for Mum’s cameras. I asked Ebony to help me lift the cameras but they
were not cameras they were birthday presents. I shouted “Mum’s coming. Get back
now.”
Cheeky Chocolate had gone and turned evil and I found the
cameras but they had no batteries. I decided to get some handkerchiefs to climb
out of the window but we didn’t have any money we needed to trade the toilet
roll. Ebony checked that they were safe. I climbed out of the window. Mum went
to the toilet and shouted “Where is the toilet roll?” No-one answered. “I am
stuck!” she called. Then Shane came. He got some toilet roll and Mum said
thanks and told him she grounded someone. “You did? Who?” “Ebony and Karla and
I didn’t have any toilet roll.” “I will see what they are up to.” said Shane.
Shane spotted the toilet rolls, We weren’t in our beds and as for Cheeky
Chocolate she had turned back into a cuddle toy. Ebony and me found a battery shop.
“OK. Yes let’s go now.”
Cheeky Chocolate came alive again and Ebony and I finally
got back in. Because Mum and Dad were awake I set the cameras up but Mum did
not have any chocolate so Cheeky did not move. She struck the next night and we
got Cheeky Chocolate on camera. We were grounded and Mum said “Go to bed
again.”
Cheeky Chocolate had a key to everyone’s secret and we had
dressed up as treat woman and went to the doorstep. Mum said “Come in.” The
girls said “We need old treat boxes as we have seen Cheeky’s bite marks on the
boxes.” Mum asked “Who is Cheeky Chocolate?” “The cheekiest chocolate in the
whole wide world” we replied. Mum said “Oh dear. I blamed it on the girls.
Girls come downstairs.” The girls said “Is our work done here?” and Mum said
“Yes. Get changed quickly. Oh girls. I’m sorry I blamed it on you. I think you
were right. Let’s have a snuggle up on the sofa”. So they snuggled up and had
popcorn together and watched a movie. Cheeky Chocolate promised to never be bad
again so the girls gave her a lovely, nice, warm home and Shane came home too.
By Karla.
The Army Truck Attack
On October 1st I was in my snuggly, warm den. I was playing
with Jeff the truck. Jeff came alive and I took him for a ride. He ran out of
fuel. One minute later I found some fuel and an hour later I had lunch. Jack,
me and Oliver went to camp and we got to go on a toy truck. I won and the next
day it was hectic. We got to put our tents up. Luckily I had three cups of tea and
we had cheese sandwiches and crisps. It was cold so we got the fire to light and
it was brilliant. At midnight we were fast asleep then we had bananas for
breakfast. I got caught by the baddies so my friends got me out but got seen
and we got away. Me and my friends got a camera so we could see everything and
I got a droan remote control. I got it to work but it was hard to fly. Soon it
was ready. I was looking at the pictures and they had a lot of people but they
were mean. The leader was mean. My granddad was there and he said why don’t you
be his friend? He said no but I put music on and I said “Whoa, whoa, whoa Livin
on a Prayer.” He joined in and we were friends.
By Ben
A Little Mean Rabbit
Once in a dark bedroom at 8 o’clock I was playing with my
favourite toy. Next I looked at Peter
Rabbit and I smiled. I carried on playing with my toys. When I snuggled with
Peter Rabbit he came alive! I couldn’t believe it! I loved playing with him.
One second later we fell over. I looked down and I saw a JCB. “You’re alive!” I
said. “Yes I am” the JCB said. Peter Rabbit and I ran away. We were terrified!
I put CCTV cameras around my room in the corners. All the corners.
The next day I looked on the CCTV cameras and Peter Rabbit
and JCB went crazy in the middle of the night.
I said to Peter Rabbit “Why did you go crazy in the middle of the
night?” Peter Rabbit said “It was just
for fun.” I said “Fair enough.” And they did it every night. I got tired of
them doing it.
One night they caused some trouble. They got on top of my
wardrobe and got my nerf gun. They shot the CCTV cameras without me noticing.
In the morning I looked at my CCTV cameras and they were all broken. But a new one
only cost £10 luckily.
The next night… I spied on them. Peter was magic. Peter Rabbit
made an army. I said “Peter what are you
doing?” and I picked up the nerf gun and Peter’s army charged at me. I locked
them in my room then I got a saw and chopped a hole in the door and shot them all
and Peter was powerless. He never came alive again unless I put amethyst on
him.
We thought we would live not happily ever after but the
bullet only lasted about ten minutes. Luckily I had a plan, a very dangerous
plan. I got a piece of string and attached it to a big book. Some of the string
was attached to the ceiling with a pulley and a carrot underneath the big book.
Peter Rabbit and his army ate the carrot and I let go of the string. BANG! It
went on Peter Rabbit and his army. They were flat as a pancake. They never came
alive again and me, Dad and Mum were fine. I celebrated! We lived happily ever
after.
By Jack.